Black Ghost

*Updated* I took all your suggestions and amped up this poem, and replaced the last stanza. ^_^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Snowflake Technique Phasing Key Scenes Story Question Try those on for size. :wink: [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Any idea can be original, as long as the writing's good. For example, the plotline of Juno (girl gets pregnant) isn't very original, but the movie as a whole was ...

Sounds like your basic post-apocalyptic world dictatorship thing. Sure, it could be a novel, but you would need to be creative to keep it from being cliche. [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Its a heart on a building.... XD 8/10 It's sweet. ^_^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]

They look very good. ^_^ I can remember watching Sailor Moon when I was younger. XD [s] BlackGhost [/s]

8/10 Pretty cool ^_^ [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I don't know if you read the rules, but you should review at least two other works before posting one of your own. ^_^ Just remember ...

The Voices are Many would like a stab. ^_^ I would love just any overall impressions, and any advice or criticism you have. :P Thank you! [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Huh? I seriously doubt that there is anything in the Bible against interracial anything. Jesus said to love all peoples. 'Nuff said. [s] BlackGhost [/s]

Check out Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwight V. Swain. It's really an amazing how-to book on writing, in my opinion the best there is. It goes in-depth on ...

Very interesting concept for a story! :D The idea of having no feelings and whatnot, it seems like a very original idea to me. ^_^ But I did notice a ...

Um... Cirque Du Freak. I only read the first one, but seriously, it sounds like it was written by a nine-year-old. :? And everyone I asked was like "OMG IT'S ...

I think we all have the potential to get there someday. 25 years is a long time, and I doubt that anyone serious about writing won't get on that list ...

It's an interesting start you've got, though it's not without a few flaws. ^_^ For example, you use way too many adjectives, especially in the first sentence: The foreboding shadows ...